Friday, August 14, 2015

Writing Term 3


Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

  • add some detail to my writing
  • choose words to make my writing more interesting



We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.

"I like to write about my friends and food.  I sound out the words when I can't write it.  I know the word love - it's LOVE.  I am a good writer."
Cohen

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You wrote a lovely story about the performance we watched Cohen. You are starting to gain confidence in your story writing and are now beginning to write a lot more.